Wow!"where sharp edges fear to tredpink is no longer innocencewhen the eyes begin to dread!"I loved this.
we want you to write More -so you can get some extra breadKarthik is a nuisanceChriz is a nerd!:) - doesn't it rhymes with your poem???What say?Yes me the back temporarily...
Blogging turned out to boreThough people call me Weasley FredLancelot has no senseReading this, your eyes are red!!:) Lance.. How is this??~~~~~~~~~~~KARTHIK~~~~~~~~~~~
I couldn't understand anything here Vinnie... will try over weekend ,
I like the last 2 lines... very deep... its like, whoa!!
OK, here's mine:The batsman hits a fourAnd the bowler views him with hatredThe crowd present in large attendanceCheer, as fifties turn into hundreds:-)
i didnt understand the full meaning, but loved the last two lines.. take care :-)
that was too good.And U say that U arent into poems...who are U trying to kid... Urself...hey- I loved that poem. the 3rd line abt pink no longer being an innocence- was good.cheers... :)
and thats when you are right :D4 liners are the best posts, no sersly :D
Hey Vinnie...I did not understand it....could assume a few things...but am not sure!! :(
wow Vinnie... I'm amazed... and its good to see this talented side of urs :)take care mate... :)
That was intense... Waiting for the funny ones... Have a great weekend :)
Wild Child wow!! 3/4 !! not bad..thanks yaar!Lancelot u the silluvai? yepdi irrike saar??r u sure u want more of this rubbish from me?? :DKarthik lance bashing! ana iddhe poemla comment yenge?...may the Tamil gods forgive me :PKanagu dont spoil ur weekend yaar!! its utter nonsense..changes by the moment!Ashwathy wow! 2/4...now thats cool..:P
"pink is no longer innocencewhen the eyes begin to dread"this is very truenice and concise lines :)
Parikshith oye..4 + 50 = 100 ?? sahi hain...yeh tho cricket hain!thanks for sharing this wonderful four liner...kya maara hain!Amal :) i appreciate ur honesty...but its no meaning at all..really!its more like - one cannot often use shapes with defined edges to convey an expression that is 'formless' n thats when the 'abstract' comes in handy!Muthu WOW...1/4 !! i am an expert now i guess...all with ur blessings Lord Muthu!Peter :) true!!yeh four liners ab private blog mein hi teek hain...ab logon ko is tarah parehsan-hairaan karna munasif nahi :PAditi...:) :) its fine sweety! every assumption may be a different reality...u dont brak ur precious head on my char linein :)Arv :) thanks!! Miss Kido hmmmm...char linein funny wale - coming up only for u!
Suyog :) 2/4...sahi hain! thaanku!
//claps//Good one :)
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