Jul 1, 2009

Perception personified!

the abstract hits a score -
where sharp edges fear to tred
pink is no longer innocence
when the eyes begin to dread!

17 comments:

~*wILd chILd*~ said...

Wow!

"where sharp edges fear to tred
pink is no longer innocence
when the eyes begin to dread!"

I loved this.

Lancelot said...

we want you to write More -
so you can get some extra bread
Karthik is a nuisance
Chriz is a nerd!

:) - doesn't it rhymes with your poem???

What say?Yes me the back temporarily...

You Know Phoo said...

Blogging turned out to bore
Though people call me Weasley Fred
Lancelot has no sense
Reading this, your eyes are red!!

:) Lance.. How is this??


~~~~~~~~~~~KARTHIK~~~~~~~~~~~

kanagu said...

I couldn't understand anything here Vinnie... will try over weekend ,

Ashwathy said...

I like the last 2 lines... very deep... its like, whoa!!

Parikshith Kumar said...

OK, here's mine:

The batsman hits a four
And the bowler views him with hatred
The crowd present in large attendance
Cheer, as fifties turn into hundreds

:-)

Amal Bose said...

i didnt understand the full meaning, but loved the last two lines..
take care :-)

muthu said...

that was too good.

And U say that U arent into poems...

who are U trying to kid... Urself...

hey- I loved that poem.

the 3rd line abt pink no longer being an innocence- was good.


cheers... :)

peter said...

and thats when you are right :D

4 liners are the best posts, no sersly :D

Aditi..............:) said...

Hey Vinnie...I did not understand it....could assume a few things...but am not sure!! :(

Arv said...

wow Vinnie... I'm amazed... and its good to see this talented side of urs :)

take care mate... :)

Miss Kido said...

That was intense...

Waiting for the funny ones...

Have a great weekend :)

Vinnie said...

Wild Child
wow!! 3/4 !! not bad..thanks yaar!

Lancelot
u the silluvai? yepdi irrike saar??
r u sure u want more of this rubbish from me?? :D

Karthik
lance bashing! ana iddhe poemla comment yenge?...may the Tamil gods forgive me :P

Kanagu
dont spoil ur weekend yaar!! its utter nonsense..changes by the moment!

Ashwathy
wow! 2/4...now thats cool..:P

Suyog said...

"pink is no longer innocence
when the eyes begin to dread"

this is very true

nice and concise lines :)

Vinnie said...

Parikshith
oye..4 + 50 = 100 ?? sahi hain...yeh tho cricket hain!
thanks for sharing this wonderful four liner...kya maara hain!

Amal
:) i appreciate ur honesty...but its no meaning at all..really!
its more like - one cannot often use shapes with defined edges to convey an expression that is 'formless' n thats when the 'abstract' comes in handy!

Muthu
WOW...1/4 !! i am an expert now i guess...all with ur blessings Lord Muthu!

Peter
:) true!!
yeh four liners ab private blog mein hi teek hain...ab logon ko is tarah parehsan-hairaan karna munasif nahi :P

Aditi...:)
:) its fine sweety! every assumption may be a different reality...u dont brak ur precious head on my char linein :)

Arv
:) thanks!!

Miss Kido
hmmmm...char linein funny wale - coming up only for u!

Vinnie said...

Suyog
:) 2/4...sahi hain! thaanku!

ItAteMyBrain said...

//claps//
Good one :)

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