“What is this life if not about agony, despair and sorrow?” cried the young medical intern at the government hospital.
Blood, tears and mutilated bodies dwarfed his vision as the uninvited tremors had uprooted thousands. His young blood, infuriated.
“No, it isn’t…”, stated the nurse, ‘…the lady in bed 8 has just delivered a baby!”
36 comments:
me the first :)
A superb one Vinnie :D
loved it much :)
Cheers vinnie.... nice one i say.....
crisp and direct.....
Ah another fiction55!! nice .
Velu
ya.. some of greatest things happen at the worst of places.. not that hospitals are bad, but in between all the pain n suffering things like this are indeed a blessing
Beautiful...so true take the happy notes from those small small things in life...
wow,it was really good
That's the way life is..........when u think of giving off you see a ray of hope.
Loved it.....
Thats beautiful...
Sometimes even lots n lots of words cant express what s to be said n sometimes jus a few of them say more than everything..
wooooooooowwwww...
a lovely 55 fiction mate... with a strong message to all those who are feeling down :)
have a nice day... cheers...
Forgot to say... your pooh cooling off pic is so cute :)
Hope is a good thing, may be not the best of things; but all good things never die.
:)
Lovely narration. Life is all about how we choose to see it. Nain?
Peace. Have a nice day.
Kanagu
eclairs again! >O< >O<
thank u thank u :)
Muthu
thanks man, u have approved it means it must be good:)
Velu
hey Captain...thank u:) n how r u doing now?
Amal
indeed they r...maybe everything is neutral..nothing good or bad:)
Lance!!
where the heck have u been da??? K has scandalised u big time...check his space if u havent already:)
yeah, new life is beautiful n fills us with hope:)
Manjarithank u girl:) do give 55 a try too...
Nikhil:):) thanks yaar!
Simply Surthank u girl:) yeh sab 55 fiction ka kamaal hain...saara story 55 words ya kum mein hi likhna hain:)
Arvthankssssssssssss mate!!
glad if the message fills up hope:)
u too have a great day ahead..cheers!
Kanagu
:) thanks da..it makes up for the stupid header na?? thanks to doobix.com :)
Kartz
:) haanji bilkul !
Hope n despair exist in duality...if we maintain a neutral attitude, i guess we will begin to 'see' clearly :)
thanks da...'Hope' i can live upto better narrations!!
aw..
vinnie with a funny one..
how sweet...
i need a baby now
chriz
Hmmmmm
That makes a lot f sense, and I wonder if u urself realized when u wrote it !!
Coz there are times when your words make a lot more sense than you actually estimate.
ME liked it and this 55 fiction thngy sounds cool, i will write one soon ;)
i tried my hand in writing it, only to know that i ended up writing 555 words fiction instead of 55 fiction...uff! please donate me some part of your brain
neat words :)
Hope is sometimes the most over used word I feel. But the way you have depicted it , its simply marvelous as it clearly puts a pessimist mind into a shift of gears towards something called 'hope'.
great going vinnie !!! keep the positive stuff coming ! :)
Chriz
:) audition for Rakhi's Swayamvar
Peter
thanks yaar..n all the very best!
nothing makes sense to me ever!
vaise sense n nonsense is the same...lemme prove it mathematically:
let sense = 1 (number of value)
and non = 0 (number of nil value)
therefor nonsense = 01
replacing with new values we get: 1 = 01(thus proved!!)
i HOPE this makes sense! :)
Gayathri
:) Pls think hard whether u really want my brain...u r a brave woman!!
a secret tip..school mein precis writing kiya tha na...got it?
ur 55 fiction better come up soon..
Preeti
my halley's comet! How was ur journey?? my blog has been blessed:)
Rags
HOPE LIFE LOVE GIVE r all hyped just like the popular f-lettered words...
thanks man...me too HOPE to keep them coming! :)
talk about despair and hope on the same room!!
am a late lateef in commenting now :)..
arey vinnie pooh.. u became an expert in 55fiction yaar..keep em..coming....and dont worry abt publicity I'll take of it..I'll copy one of urs and post in my blog also :D:D...
and yea..2 imp things to be done..
1) Post the twitter link on ur blog, so that people who are interested in u can follow u there
2) Post ur blog link in twitter profile also so that ur fans there in twitter might love to read ur blog also..
Sorry but I have read or heard it before.. now don't throw fits at me.. sachhi muchhi I have read it before!!
oh BTW, if this pooh is really trying to cool off? the expressions on his face and gestures suggest some thing else.. or its just my filthy mind :P
a ray of hope
beautiful piece
smtimes 55 words can make so much sense... loved it completely
55 fiction??? Lucky this was not a tag.. I wouldn't have done it.. me like doing 55000 fiction :P
Ready to challenge me??
Sawan
:)
Unknown
hehhehe...dont u dare:)
thanks for the imp tips..will do that now:)
ST
hmmm..what can i say? kudiyon..na dariyo..chal post vost ab kariyo..kudiyon na dariyo..ST ko yun hi tang kariyo!
u said it man..its the filth in u:) Pooh is a sweetie pie:)
d gyspy
thanks yaar! thanks for the visit n hope to c u often:)
n i wonder why they say 'never follow a gypsy' :)
Karthik
no da..u be happy with ur novel posts:)
That does make some sense :P
I cant stop praising this one.....loved it!!!!!!!!!
Peter
see what i mean!!
Aditi.......:)
thank u girl...am so glad u loved it! i hope i can live upto more such stories!
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