Apr 29, 2009

The Irony!

woh jannat ki khoj mein nikla hain…
uske liye Mecca bhi door nahi,
apni begum ki izzath se beparvaah
nikla hain tere khoj mein eh Allah !…"

Thus concluded the fakir amidst much applause.

Wah wah wah!”, praised the old Sheikh in delight and quickly got up, shoving his new virgin bride all of 12.


P.S: Please forgive the hindi-urdu mix-up if any. Also, here's the translation for Karthik, Kanagu n Lance:
"He has left in search of heaven...
Even Mecca is not far for him,
He doesn’t care to respect his wife
He has left in search of u, O Allah!.."

40 comments:

Velu said...

Wah wah! excellent fiction55

cheers,
velu

muthu said...

that was brutally good vinnie.....

I loved it..

i hate it when gals are subjugated and i hate it even more when they do not rebel against it.....

Amal Bose said...

this is the only reason i hate people for. :-(

Lancelot said...

wah wah wah...Kiya bath hein kiya bath hein...

KARTHIK give her that pearl necklace...

sawan said...

:( we shud put mirchi powder, hot oil and salt and make a shake out of those sheikhs!!

Durga said...

You have penned it beautifully.This is not a fiction.These are all real life stories.

Arv said...

wow... u r getting good at this... ironical indeed...

take care mate... cheers...

Chriz said...

Rest in peace..

where is christopher robin in the picture? on ur header?

kanagu said...

nice one Vinnie :)

Scattered Thoughts... said...

pooh bana philosopher?? inspiration?

like all those reality TV shows these days scrawler and your blog is becoming reality blogs :D

Simply Sur said...

wah wah.. wah wah.. Thats a gud one babes!

preeti said...

oye halley's comet is back dear :):)

the wife shd get a new sheikh and shake him up if he leaves to allah to or send this guy truly to allah and spare him the ardous journey to mecca :):)
Ye le HUGS for a cool post here :):)

Aditi..............:) said...

That was to the point and the message reached strongly!!!
Good going :)

peter said...

I'll take that English translation for myself too :D

Now temme logically what does it mean :P :P ?

YEs I am dumb :D

Vinnie said...

Velu
thank u Captain! u r first so eclairs for u... >O< >O<

Muthu
hmmmm...this child bride is a disturbing thing, who says we r in 21st century? glad that u liked it..thanks!

Amal
what??? u hate me? :( !

its a hippocritical society n such sheikhs will continue having more child brides...a fear based society has bred such ridiculous thoughts. i've heard that this happens due to a belief that one can increase his lifespan if he has intercourse with young virgins...can u beat that???

Vinnie said...

Lance
Thanks ur Highness:) K hasnt given any pearl necklace yet:( btw, can u make it platinum studded with diamonds???

Sawan
sweetie:) i know how u feel especially when we love kids...n 12 is such a tender age yaar...Allah, better intervene with hot oil, mirchi,salt,etc

Durga
thank u, scrawler...these kinds should be drowned in their own oil produce n set fire upon

Vinnie said...

Arv
thanks mate! u have a good (sleepy) day too :)

Chriz
he is sitting on the fence behind..kinda camera shy guy:)

Kanagu
thanks da:)

ST
reality affects us one way or the other...hope u liked this at least:)

Vinnie said...

Simply Sur
shukriya shukriya janab:)

Preetihalley's back!
the wife could do so much but she is just a little kid...n thats the whole effing issue:( :(
thanks n hope to c urs soon..i know it would be dead funny:)

Aditi......:)
i hope i got the dots in ur name right ?? :)
thanks yaar :)

Peterhehhehee..thank u !! thank u !!
now i know for sure u accept my equation:)
maine aaj subah ka injection nahi liya :(

Kartz said...

Subhaan Allah, kya likha hai...

May whoever-He-is-up-there drive some sense to the deserving. Period.

Peace.

Nikki said...

Interesting (I did read it twice!).

Vinnie said...

Kartz
thanks da! HE better..

Nikki
thats nice :) thanks for visiting me...

Inder said...

and his society accepts it... the laws he abide to supports it. sad.

Nikhil said...

Good one Vinnie..................i am sure there must be some intresting stories in the old sheikhs family as well. Do explore them. I just found one between Rubina (one of the 12) and Azar (Musician)

Vinnie said...

Inder
sad:(

Nikhil
thanks! LOLsss..great idea yaar..ekdum sahi hain!
btw, 12 is her age not her number in his harem!
par Rubina n Azar sounds yummmmm:)

Unknown!!! said...

Excellent Vinnie.. maxxx respects for this wonderful piece.. u're an expert now.. :)

Vinnie said...

Unknownthanks so much, Balaji!
now i have ur blessings..err brand promotion..meri equity bada do:)

Suyog said...

successfully conveyed all the thoughts :)

keep rocking :)

Amal Bose said...

@Vinnie
no i didnt mean you, i meant this situation

Vinnie said...

Suyog
thanks!! thanks for the visit..

Amal
hehehe..i was pulling ur leg, baba:) i know ur views on child rights abuse..

Karthik Youngistan said...

Ergg.... Is this blog turning panch panch fiction vinnie??? :O

//He has left in search of heaven...//


Died.. ok!!


//Even Mecca is not far for him,//


//He doesn’t care to respect his wife//


//But he has left in search of Allah!..//

He didnt care for his wife?? then why MECCA??? :O he shd b put in hell not Heaven (Mecca)

BrownPhantom said...

Steely irony.
Strong writing Vinnie :).

anoop erakkil said...

dropped in from muthu's blog and the mention of 55 fiction..pretty good concept..
and devastatingly realistic piece of fiction this!!!

Vinnie said...

Karthik
thanks for ur PJ's lekin yeh kadwa sach hain..child brides..literally baby brides..utterly disgusting we humans r :(

BrownPhantom
thanks yaar!

Anoop
thanks for dropping in..u r most welcome :) a friend of muthu is my friend too!
vaise, r u related to Anoop Desai - that American Idol contestant?
sad he didnt make it..hope they bring him back thru wildcard!

thanks for liking this realistic fiction!

anoop erakkil said...

Vinnie, thing is am a stranger who'd dropped into muthus blog one fine day and started following the blog,and now onto yours thro his blog and i guess this blog hopping would continue...as long i find time n good stuff to read online..
only i wish i too could try my hand at creative writing...

and thannks to the Desai guy, atleast my name is world famous;)
btw if photography sounds interesting..do drop into my photo-blog..,

Karthik said...

//PJ's lekin yeh kadwa sach hain.//

Wooh ladki hey kahaan... :)DIL CHATA HAI

Splendid

Terrific

Ultimate

Perfect

Ideal

Discern

Vinnie said...

Anoop
from strangers to friends...i will definitely visit ur blog!
Anoop Desai..will always remain within me..those eyes to die for and that voice to live for!

pls start with 55 fiction...dont 'try'..all the best!

Karthik
woh ladki hain yahan...ti di di di di di..ti di di di!
STUPID :) wow..u made that up???
i'm tagging u for 55 fiction

~*wILd chILd*~ said...

Wow! good one.

Vinnie said...

Wild child
thank u!!

I am Alive said...

Hey.. Very terse & precise....
Poor Shaikh.. Forgive him, he is just a "Man" ... showing his obvious traits :)

Vinnie said...

I am alive
its only 55 words..try it for urself too..check my first one titled - I love only u

thanks :) n Shaikh's with baby wives r horrendous :(

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